Do you hear my cry?
Or my sigh?
Do you see me try?
Oh! The anguished pain!
Am I sane?
Or stuck on this train?
Forgive me my sins,
Start again,
Life we will regain.
Oh, choose me once more;
Let us soar
And once more adore!
Leave me not alone
Cold as stone,
But pick up the phone!
Talk and walk with me;
Do not balk,
But your door unlock…
Note: Thank you to Manan Unleashed for introducing me to the Lune form of poetry. I quite enjoyed the challenge and satisfaction of this (another) unique approach!
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Way to go, Jon. I am so happy to see this . Its beautiful. Isn’t inspiration so wonderful? Much love and light to you, my dear dear friend ❤
Thank you, my friend, and to you much love, peace, and joy! 🙂
To you too, Jon:)
I feel the longing in your lines. Cuts too close to home. I wish I could have said it as beautifully as you have. 🙂
Thank you so very much; your words of compliment mean more than I can express in words. All the best to you w/many blessings!
Thank you so very much; your words of compliment mean more than I can express in words. All the best to you w/many blessings!
And yes Bravo! Kindred spirits, you and I.
Everytime I read, I want to leave some words for you. This is my third read and you have done a marvellous job. Lune in rhymes. Wow!!:you outdid yourself. Gorgeous series. Stunning all around. May poetry always continue to be the binding force.
Thank you again for such kind words of approbation; they mean so much to me! 🙂
I’m happy I can spread a little warmth
How do i reblog this?
There is a “Reblog” button to the left of the “Like” button. Just click on that and voila! It’s reblogged! 😉
Ok. Right away! 🙂
Wow! Thank you for sharing this on your wonderful site! 😀
Not at all. The pleasure was mine. 🙂
Reblogged this on Manan Unleashed and commented:
I generally do not reblog. But this one, I just had to. And not because my friend here has mentioned my name. But because this piece is stunning, considering its Jon’s first attempt at the Lune form of poetry. Please go to his site directly and feel the strings of your heart being tugged by this wonderfully sensitive poet and my dear friend. Thank you all. May poetry continue to be the binding force.
Great write.
Thank you!
Tears in beautiful r not seemed good.why r u cry?whoever is d reason of dt tearing;look n wait for sometime;he will have to come.his door of heart was never closed n will be never close coz u r his soul as he is ur soul.love never dies.it is immortal as God n its voice is God’s voice.bless u,dear.
Thank you so much for reading and for your lovely encouragement. Blessings to you!
*tears in beautiful eyes.
woah!
This is wonderful
very powerful words n feelings!
Stay happy Jonathan
lots of love to u ; ))
Thank you, and to you as well, Jyotee! 🙂
wow what a cascade of lunes and that rhyme scheme is perfect. It drives the reader on.
Thank you so much, Melinda! All the best to you! 🙂
you’re welcome 🙂 all the best to you too!