She broke her back and fell thru the cracks,
And it was a nasty basement, filthy encasement,
But nobody said ‘goodbye’ and no one heard her cry;
Sighing was all she had left, ‘cept lying to herself,
But one good lie would dry her tears despite her fear
Because she was alone with nobody near to hear;
No one missed her, and no one came for her,
And this pissed her,
But what could she do with broken back and lack of help?
Yelping would not keep her sane, so she chose to sleep
On a neat pile of rags, about which she could not brag,
But all in all she knew her situation was not unique;
Many had fallen thru the cracks with broken backs!
I like it. I’m not sure why I like it, but I like it!
Thank you, Lavender! I’m so glad you enjoyed this poem! All the best to you w/blessings.
Now this is writing! ‘But one good lie would dry her tears despite her fears.’
Much appreciated, my friend! Really and truly… All the best to you. 🙂
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Thank you for your very gracious comment, Shrey, and I certainly will visit your blog! All the best to you w/blessings!