On November 29th I began a seven-day poem with one stanza, and committed to adding one each day thereafter for seven days. This is Day Five. (For more info on why I’m doing this, please read my previous article.) So in the end I should have one whole poem with seven stanzas, each one having been written on a different day…
Seven-Day Poem
You intrigued me by being intrigued by me
As I wondered, ‘how can this possibly be?’
Am I to have another ‘she’ in my poor life
And will it be but another knife to my soul?
Now part of my heart feels young once again
As I begin to ponder all of the possibilities
But reality attacks and smacks me in the face
Reminding me of my actual place in this life
I am not really old but I am growing old
And though my heart is warm, my body is cold;
And I have not the strength to chase rabbits,
Or to form new habits or weather the storm
But you, you would shove all else aside for love,
To drink deeply from the rich cream of full life,
To fulfill your most cherished childhood dreams,
And no team of strong stallions can tear you away!
You deny reality staring you straight in the face
As you pace back and forth considering the worth
Of a bond newly birthed in raw desire unearthed
Never thinking we’ve nothing to give for this to live
Note: Thank you to Maja at Business in Rhyme for inspiring me to take up this challenge! By the way, her own 31-day poem is progressing very nicely, so if you haven’t done so, you should check it out! Blessings!
“I am not really old but I am growing old; / though my heart is warm, my body is cold.” Oh dear: I know that feeling all too well. Now I can only chase rabbits in my dreams!
Ha! LOL Indeed! Thank you, Roger, and all the best to you! 🙂
Love never gets old. Nice poetry!
You’re right, love never gets old … but I sure am! LOL 😉 Thank you so much for your comment! All the best to you w/peace and blessings!
Super
Thank you!
You are one of my favourite writers. This again is turning out to be a master piece. 😀
Oh, thank you so much so saying so! You’ve brightened my day and put a smile in my heart and on my lips. As always, all the best to you with peace and blessings!
You deserve to be happy, always. 🙂
🙂 🙂 🙂
This is an accomplished piece of writing. I love the form, imagery, tone, pacing and how you reflect on love. And this line, I am not really old but I am growing old…” captures the message perfectly!
Thank you, dear Khaya! All the best to you with blessings, dear friend! 🙂