On November 29th I began a seven-day poem with one stanza, and committed to adding one each day thereafter for seven days. This is Day Six. (For more info on why I’m doing this, please read my previous article.) So in the end I should have one whole poem with seven stanzas, each one having been written on a different day…
Seven-Day Poem
You intrigued me by being intrigued by me
As I wondered, ‘how can this possibly be?’
Am I to have another ‘she’ in my poor life
And will it be but another knife to my soul?
Now part of my heart feels young once again
As I begin to ponder all of the possibilities
But reality attacks and smacks me in the face
Reminding me of my actual place in this life
I am not really old but I am growing old
And though my heart is warm, my body is cold;
And I have not the strength to chase rabbits,
Or to form new habits or weather the storm
But you, you would shove all else aside for love,
To drink deeply from the rich cream of full life,
To fulfill your most cherished childhood dreams,
And no team of strong stallions can tear you away!
You deny reality staring you straight in the face
As you pace back and forth considering the worth
Of a bond newly birthed in raw desire unearthed
Never thinking we’ve nothing to give for this to live
But roses still bloom in season for good reason,
And then their beauty fades, having bade farewell,
And those roses do die and never try to live on and on;
Ah! There truly is propriety in the society of life!
Note: Thank you to Maja at Business in Rhyme for inspiring me to take up this challenge! By the way, her own 31-day poem is progressing very nicely, so if you haven’t done so, you should check it out! Blessings! For Day Seven, the final outcome, go here!
really strong
very powerful
As always Sheldon
Thank you, my friend!
yeah!
so so so beautiful !
I believe u can write 700 poems in 7 days… ( smiling )
n nothing is wrong with another “she”
life is fine! : )
Oh thank you for such kind and uplifting words, Jyotee! Peace and blessings to you! 🙂
I like the stark contrast between the poet and “she”. Nicely written. Looking forward to the next day.
Thank you very, very much! 🙂
really lovely poem – wonder how does it end 🙂
Thank you! And do you know, I was just wondering the same? lol How will it end??? All the best to you w/blessings!