Heavy is the pack
By your side, I’ll be your back
No help you will lack
Long the road ahead
Here, my chest to rest your head
And you’ll be well-fed
Deepest sea to sail
I will guard you from the gale
With me you’ll prevail
Carry on . . . I am with you,
Never to leave nor forsake!
I love how you built this. There is a particularly attractive tone that comes through to me that was very pleasing
Thank you so much, Rob! I deeply appreciate your gracious comment!
You are quite welcome
Beautiful poetry indeed.
Thank you so very, very much!
Oh guide or a sailor of love’s ocean.seem-i m seeing a immortal painting of greek mythology.
Ah! Close you are but not quite! 🙂 Thank you so much for your comment, dear Aruna, and all of the best to you with blessings!
Dear noble guy .i know u before one years n know about ur pain.but pain is not presente then how d wonderful poems is created.happieness n pain are two aspect of life’s coin.i am special admirer of ur written work.u r forever welcome.
Oh my…. thank you so very much! 🙂
Most welcome ,dear noble guy.