Speckles of freckles splashed across your face
With dancing eyes lancing all who look in joy
At the prancing spirit welling up from inside
Of an open heart occupied by love amplified
By heaven with leavening grace in sure place
Of everything that should be right by the light
Of an immortal youth never fading or abating
Awesome poetic splendour, Jonathan. Loved your ending, whether speckles or freckles nothing matters. Immortal youth that never fades or abates. It is pure divinity.
Indeed it is, and so very refreshing! Thank you so much for your kind words, dear Kamal!
Welcome dear Jonathan.
Love the imagery. The last line is just brilliant.
Ah, thanks so much, Tosha! Coming from you, that mean a LOT! Blessings! 🙂 🙂 🙂
You’re welcome ❤️
Read brilliant poetry by you again, dear Jonathan. Hope all is well and sending a big hug again! XxX
Big hugs to you, too, dear Patty. And thank you ever so much for your very kind words! Have an awesome weekend, dear friend!