By Jonathan Noble
I am the pusher, the user, the drunkard laid upon the floor;
I am the whore, the prostitute, the refuse knockin’ at your door;
I am the working man, poor man, the child starving in the night;
I am the sick, the diseased, the dying from an unknown plight…
I am the albatross around your neck,
The nightmare that will never go away;
I am the life of promise become a wreck,
The horror of creation, ever here to stay.
I am the rapist, heartless killer, the thief in the dark;
I am the demon, the beast, stamped with the mark;
I am the singer, the binger, the beloved movie star;
I am the doctor, lawyer, the friendless man at the bar;
I am your brightest dream that faded away,
All of your hopes and prayers for a better day;
I am the inescapable truth of life in this world,
The vilest evil, what makes the blood run cold.
And what will you do with me, saddled as you are ~
Such a troublesome burden, and creation’s scar?
Will you throw me away and simply let me be,
When you realize that I am you and you are me?
Wow, such raw truth in that! We try so hard to create a scale of sin, yet fail to realize that any sin is a separation from God. There are different consequences in THIS life for sin, but for the eternal life any sin, every sin, uncovered by the blood of Christ has the same consequence. This life is but a mist….eternity is forever.
I love your last statement: “This life is but a mist … eternity is forever.” I may have to borrow that! Thank you again and blessings.
I wrote one titled “I AM”
I Am.
I care.
In troubled times I will be there
To comfort you,
And lift you up from deep despair.
I AM.
I care.
In troubled times I will be there
To comfort you
And strengthen
Through the love I share
With all mankind
So you may know I care.
Beautiful Hank! Thank you for sharing!
That poem is brilliant! We are darker than sin if we do not embrace the lost and lonely evil ones struggling to survive in places devoid of hope. We are truly EVERYMAN.
Oh so true… So very, very true. And thank you, Wendy!
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Wow. This is brilliant.
🙂
Thank you so much, stacilys! 🙂
the melodic sway of the lines is absolutely captivating! kudos!
Thank you so very much!
you are most welcome!
I would shake your hand and say “Thank you”.
You are most welcome, and thank you!
Brilliant!
Thank you very much!
What a great introductory poem! Very nice to meet you Jonathan! Looking forward to reading more of you!
~ Dajena 🙂
Thank you so very much! All the best to you w/peace and blessings, Dajena! 🙂
Amen! 🙂
Thank you for writing this, brother.
And thank you, as well, for reading and offering such a gracious comment! Blessings!
I am very intrigued by your writing and I look forward to following your blog.
Thank you for your gracious words, and also for following my blog! All the best to you!
Wow! Amazing!
I want to be like you when I grow up !😁😝
Love this post!💖
🐾 Andrea
LOL Thank you, Andrea… Just don’t grow up too fast! 😝
😁😁😝😁 ok!
Hey Jonathon! Hope all ok with you & you’re safe? TC, buddy!
Yes, my friend, I am safe and healthy. I’ve been away for quite some time, and have had no Internet access, but now I’m back on line again! I dearly hope and pray you are doing well, too! Take care and God bless!