I can see you in my dreams
You fly so high up into my sky
While you stultify me as I cry
And I cannot reach you though I desire
With love burning brightly in blue-flaming fire
But never quite knowing what you require
As I lay me down for my soul to expire
Hold me now as I cry one last cry
Reaching for you so high in the sky
I can see you in my dream
Note: The Symetrelle is a form created by Julie Moeller Writing on Allpoetry.com as Bluejewel. She describes it thus: It begins and ends with a single subject line that is 7 syllables. It has ‘a hat and boots’, mono-rhymed couplets that lead you into and out of the subject with a 9 syllable count. At the heart of it is a mono-rhymed 4 line quatrain with an 11 syllable count.
Beauty in every stanza, Jonathan and such a wonderful picture of a dreamer, dreaming to reach to our Divine Love with open arms on the tip of a moon. Awesome poem.
Ah, thank you so very much, dear Kamal! Yes, I really enjoyed writing this one!
Welcome dear Jonathan.
Beautiful, dear Jonathan.
Ah, thank you Patty! I enjoyed this one! 🙂
Good job!
Thank you so very much!